Goodbye

In response to the Weekly Challenge to create a “fifty”… In short, a fifty is a story that is exactly 50 words long. It was not as difficult as I expected, and was actually quite fun. Hope you like my writing, I actually think it’s quite powerful.

Weekly Writing Challenge: Fifty http://dailypost.wordpress.com/2014/04/07/writing-challenge-fifty/
Tears rolling down a little boy’s face. His little heart crumbles as he endures “I love you’s” and “I’m sorry’s.” A blurry future upon the horizon. Confusion, fear, hurt, anger well up inside; so much for a little soul to take. “Goodbye mother, I love you, see you again someday.”

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